This is really good for your first time writing a story, can't wait to read more <3
Is this your first story?? it didn't look! great job. i loved it!!!!! description, characters for both heads up!
This is a really great start, your description and detail is really good, keep it up :)
read this chapter told you i would:) good so far will read more when i have chance
@TheWayHeSmiles Awh thank you for the dedication :D Really can't wait to see where this story is going!
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