Home Run (Rewriting)

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immatureandproud By immatureandproud Updated a year ago
Luke Ashton and Jayden Cole are trained players with experience, they have 4 easy steps into getting any girls they want and their plans never fail.  Base one - Smile at her to show you're interested Base two - Engage in small talk and make her laugh Base three - Get closer and kiss her Home run - Sex  However Sophie Carter has had enough experience to spot a player from miles away. Sophie and her bestfriend Emily Archer have 3 simple rules before a player is turned down:  Too complimentary - Strike one Getting too close - Strike two Trying to kiss you - Strike three and your out!  So what happens when Sophie Carter rejects Luke who has never been turned down?
Love this chapter, and also your cover and cast (especially logan lerman haha)
This sounds really interesting! Unlike all the bad boy/player stories on here, your main girl character seems smart enough not to get sucked in, which makes this original :)
I'm loving the storyline its really different and the different personalities work really well together and bring comedy to the story x