Home Run (Rewriting)

5 Part Story 3.4K Reads 34 Votes
immatureandproud By immatureandproud Updated a year ago
Luke Ashton and Jayden Cole are trained players with experience, they have 4 easy steps into getting any girls they want and their plans never fail.  Base one - Smile at her to show you're interested Base two - Engage in small talk and make her laugh Base three - Get closer and kiss her Home run - Sex  However Sophie Carter has had enough experience to spot a player from miles away. Sophie and her bestfriend Emily Archer have 3 simple rules before a player is turned down:  Too complimentary - Strike one Getting too close - Strike two Trying to kiss you - Strike three and your out!  So what happens when Sophie Carter rejects Luke who has never been turned down?
livvyis livvyis 2 years ago
Love this chapter, and also your cover and cast (especially logan lerman haha)
livvyis livvyis 2 years ago
This sounds really interesting! Unlike all the bad boy/player stories on here, your main girl character seems smart enough not to get sucked in, which makes this original :)
lipstickkisses lipstickkisses 2 years ago
I'm loving the storyline its really different and the different personalities work really well together and bring comedy to the story x