*sigh* what a good beginning. I'm excited to keep reading :3 I think you should make the banner up there your cover. It's quite capturing!
This is good. Prologue is interesting and well written. Upload the next chapter soon :D
I like it! Very nice writing style! I'll put it in my library so I can read it when you post the first chapter. :)
I think you don't need to have the time. Just the date sounds fine and better in that last paragraph. Other than that, it's sounding pretty good :)
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