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farawayfromnowhere By farawayfromnowhere Updated 2 months ago
Caroline King's dad is gone. She's depressed. She's consumed in grief and guilt. She's drowning underneath it all. And then suddenly, she is very literally drowning in the ocean, and then she finds herself encouraging the water to keep abusing her, encouraging it to keep her down under. She's drowning and she's okay with it. Until her plan of drowning is foiled when a boy jumps into the sea and saves her. And he's got some secrets of his own, and he's not going to share those anytime soon. It's up to Caroline to figure those out all on her own.
The song disappear from Christina Li started playing on my phone I think it knows what I'm reading........
you describe everything is such vast and amazing detail! it's amazing!
Great description of the pain she is feeling, it was written beautifully! You write with talent and your heart:)
Enjoyed the first chapter well done!!
This is great! I love how you conveyed the emotions. And how you started this chapter. I feel like this is going to be one amazing journey.
you describe everything so elegantly with this huge melancholy feel to it and it's so beautiful
i love your writing so much don't ever stop
Yay! Keep on updating! Especially never have I ever! I love that story