Perfect length for the prologue! The description of your story seemed really interesting, and so far the story is as well. Keep it up!
The plot is really awesome and the prologue is really intriguing. It's really well detailed and the style of writing works really well! Voted! :)
this prologue is absolutely awesome! good enough to attract people into reading it!
A really good prologue, it's really detailed and I like where you're going with this story! Voted.
This is a really good prologue, it sets the tone for the rest that is to come. It really intrigues the reader ! Voted !
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| Name | Rahnia |
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