very good beginning as i can not find any faults with it and it really does catch the readers attention :) well done x
Wow, I love these kind of stories. They always have their own kind of wing on it. If you know what I mean x) Keep up the good work~! :)
This is an amazing story! I'm a huge fan of pioneers and I love your modern twist on it! Update soon!
wow this was amazing writing ! Got my hooked instantly :) keep writing, you've got potential :D
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