I like it. It's pretty cool and the flow of the story is awesome. Keep it up alright
I love thriller books, and you have really pulled this off. Very well done. Voted!
Thie beginning kinda scared me LOL But oh well, it's very thrilling! XD Nice choice of vocab btw ;)
I was right! this is interesting! I could picture myself right there with Chance. Sounds like things are about to get pretty intense! Great job!
god...THIS IS GREAT!! I love the dialogue the characters have together. I love Chane's personality too :) this is going on my read later list!
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