@L0V3ILY When you get a chance please don't forget to check one of mine out. I'm really stuck on what to do with my peeps next. XD
The beginning really caught my attention! Thought I think you have some run-off sentences? @Broken_Swan_18 Ohh! What manga does t remind you of?
It's good:) I like the details:) Some paragraphs are a little long for my liking but I do love the details!
Love it. I liked you just jumped in and got straight to the main story. Cant wait for the next chapter. good story line. (;
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| Name | Autumn Arteese |
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| Birthday | Sep 09 |
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