this was astonishing! the way you described how she looked was very intriguing! And the way her hair turned shads was miraculous! Job well done!
wow, very intriguing! Reading the next chapter now, and I hope it lives up to what I have expected for the next chapter ^.^
Mirrors are always a great way to start a story :) I'm already loving where your going with this :D Can't wait to read it!!
Quite catchy and is successful to wake up that greedy reader in me :) looking forward to next chapter...
That was a really good intro. It definatly kept my intrest and I'm about to start the story. Hope it's as good as the intro
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