*VOTED* I liked it... A lot actually. But, well not really that man. :/ Hmmm, I like how well you portrayed Dawn's character, it's very interesting. ;) :)
I'm not really into vampire stories, but as far as your writing style goes you are doing really well.
This is very sad and beautiful. I cant wait to read more. Check out my story http://www.wattpad.com/1155187-dark-lies
I love this beginning! It has a great writing style and a great hook that makes people want to keep reading :) i voted!
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