Intriguing.... but idk if it was fitting, because its just basically repeating the blurb with a bit more detail...? But other than that, off to a great start!
Okay first off I absolutely love the short film/song thing on the side and second this sounds like a great story!:D
nice introduction you are on the right track. your introduction makes people want to read!
This is definitely different to a lot of stuff I've read, I think that it is really interesting and great job for writing so well! :3
I am really really enjoying this and have only read a few parts. I love the pace of it and yet there is enough detail to portray the scenes! Really well done.
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| Name | John Murray McKay |
| Location | Pretoria, South Africa |
| Member Since | Apr 24, 2012 |
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