I think you picked the perfect scene to draw the reader in. :)
OMG WOW!!! I love harry potter and that excerpt made me want to read more and more. Going to keep reading =)
I have to say, I've been a silent Dramoine shipper until recently. You're story gets me hooked and I can't wait for the rest.
Hooked! Love it so far. It definitely sounds like something I'd love to read further, too.
I'm not really a fan of HP but this was really well written and you can obviously write! You sure have a talent(:
I love the way you worded the chapter, I didn't notice any mistakes good chapter I will keep reading
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