I like the tone you use and your descriptions - your style is easy to read and understand and yet really sophisticated !! I really like it!! *votes* :D
good start! reread for little mistakes though, otherwise looks pretty original :)
I love the plot. It is original. I didn't see grammatical errors which is good. Keep up the good writing :D
Omg, I'm actually beginning to like this. Though, I'm not a sappy romance freak. Haha, puberty pimples. I get 'em too. xD
the intro is really catchy and and i really like that jasey isnt perfect..i'll definitely continue reading :)
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