So good, what are you talking about, not your best? Your words are truthful and flowing, and immerse the reader in a world they never knew! It's great?
I love your cover and trailer. Also a very capturing prologue, and perfect length! :)
The beginning is very catchy and well written. If this isn't your best then I can tell your pretty dang good at writting! (:
not your best? I can't wait to see what the rest of the chapters look like, if this isn't your best. This is amazing.
This was quite interesting. It hooks readers in. I can't really say much, but this is good. (:
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| Name | Mia |
| Location | Gallifrey |
| Birthday | Mar 26 |
| Member Since | May 11, 2012 |
| Votes Received | 194 |