@Retr0Radi0 - Even though there were some mistakes this was quite the fine plot. I like it. Hoping for next chapter to come.
It's interesting and flows really well, even the dialogue feels natural, not even the slightest bit forced. Great job XD
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| Name | Lilli |
| Location | c: Why do you wanna know |
| Member Since | Jul 02, 2012 |
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