wow! this is an awesome sci-fi story! im not usually int this stuff, but this is great
@TheTenth Hahah no problem! I had the same problem before someone pointed it out to me. (: Glad to have helped!
Wow! What a unique idea! This really impressed me. It was very well written and the characters were well defined (:
this is really interesting. You put a lot of effort into this. I don't really like the dad haha...keep up the good work.
I really like this beginning and I agrea that you need to use more; hes, shes and theys. But other then that its a good read.
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