lol!!! The humor in this is great! I wasn't sure what to expect, as I've read sooo many vampire stories :P. but tis was surprisingly entertaining :)
I love the detail in this chapter! You should make the first line of the story a little bit more captivating so you can grab a readers attention:)
her friends....LOL. theyre so mean but funny haha. xD good chapter :) your details and dialogue flow nicely :D
I love the name Airebi! It's so different, I've never seen it before. I love werewolf storys and I'm interested to see where this goes
Elder Jun seems interesting. I love your characters.. they all seem interesting :D Voted. i shall keep reading (:
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