Or I'll Kill You

24 Part Story 67.4K Reads 605 Votes
Cheesehead By cheesehead Completed
Maeve is a werewolf. Shes headstrong, stubborn, and outspoken. How is it possible that every guy she meets falls in love with her? Well of course it's because she's beautiful with stunning good looks. This doesn't settle with her mate, Jesse, who is overprotective and jealous. Things get worse though when a new wolf comes to the pack and claims Maeve as his, and when a vampire threatens to rip their family a part. Is Maeve strong enough to make desicions for the well being of her pack? And why is Jesse more jealous then he's ever been before? And who the heck does this new guy think he is? None of that matters though when the vampire puts Maeve's family in danger.....when the vampire puts her mate in danger.
@MadyAddy 
                                    
                                    Once I started reading.... I couldnt stop!! i sat down for like a half hour and read up to chapter 5!! i wouldve read more..... but i thought i'd give my eyes a rest lol :D
@LaurenakaAwesome 
                                    
                                    haha thanks.... appreciate that...... lol kk ill read it... btw I love your books CheeseHead and LaurenakaAwesome 
@MadyAddy OMG MADY YOU HAVE TO READ WHY DID YOU DO IT!!! IT IS ALSO BY CHEESEHEAD AND IT IS MY FAVORITE BOOK ON WATTPAD!!!!!!!
                                    HAHA <3 SIS!!!!!!
                                    HAVE FUN ON VACATION (I am not saying where becasue I don't want people creeping on my bestest buddy!) haha just thought I would include that :)
I just glanced at some of the sentences before reading it and.... WOW! I havent even really started reading it and I love it! lol if i knew how to vote, you definitally got mine.... im new to this..... lol :D
It's really good so far... can't wait to read more...
                                    voted <3
Good descriptions and emotion in the beginning, but one problem:
                                    "Jesse let out a cackle that sounded like a laugh." Cackling IS laughing. Maybe switch the words around or cut out the whole "soundling like a laugh" thing?
                                    But other than that, <3.