That's cool! Diam means quiet or silence in my language! And all the little phrases are in my language too, or sort of.
great start, very informative. c: you have a few mistakes, but i like your writing style. good job!
I like the idea and i love this genre so you know. I agree with what people have said--break it up into paragraphs :-)
Add to your private library
My LibraryAdd this story to your public reading lists