her name's so pretty and unique!! and babci is awesome sauce. great work done with the dialogue and character interactions!
Great start, great description, awesome dialogues are the key points of your story. You have done a good job in the plot and the story. Good work :D
@aprocne Yeah, I think gut instincts are usually right. You're welcome! I think this story has a LOT of potential.:)
this story is REALLY engaging! i love it! i'm definitely gonna keep reading! please update soon!!!!!
So... I LOVE these kind of stories and your writing is really good, the plot is unique and the first chapter has really captured my attention so upload soon!
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