Stopper: The Ultimate Timers Series

7 Part Story 916 Reads 53 Votes
Sassy Nicole By WanNaBeWriting Updated a year ago
Mercy Bay. Everyone sees her as a normal girl that attends school at Anne Walker High School and experiences nothing but the normal events that teens do.  But really she is not normal. Her and her family carries an ability that involves a unknown council that people don't know, a special defense team, and other groups with different abilities. Mercy never seen other people with an ability similar to her's. So she lives on a down low.  A mysterious new student comes to school and catches Mercy's attention. Could he be part of the "other groups"?...  Will it be dangerous or safe? Can he be trusted?
Actually kind of funny, I might read more later. I loved the writing style and the note added a nice aspect. One thing I would suggest is instead of using quotation marks you could just use bold writing or something. It might work better. Nice beginning though :)
Adding this to my "Read Later" I've never actually done that to someone who asked me to read what they wrote. You've done well ;)
This is the first time I came across such a genre in fantasy....I didnt understand why they used notes when they had phones.....but the chapter was intriguing and make sure you make it long....happy reading :))))
If only it could be that easy to fool a teacher when passing notes, lol. Great job with this!
This was a really playful style of writing that was easy and fun to read, well done and voted!
I really really love your style, i'm new here on wattpad and wondering if you would help me with my new book"7 minutes" by helping promote it or even just reading it through and commenting- i would really appreciate it !:)