For vampire lovers.

“Dance with me,” Anton requested, voice husky with yearning, eyes wide and imploring. 
The monster was not in his eyes. They were calm, considerate and entirely for her. 

It was Ruby's idea for her and her sisters to go grave robbing and save their father from the wrath of his creditors. She knew it wouldn't be a pleasant experience to steal from a corpse but what happens when they unearth more than they bargained for? Ruby's blood unleashes a darkness, one that claims to love her, one that threatens to consume her, one she must fight with every heartbeat.
thanks for your help ruby -_-  but its okay...you have the coolest name
Wow. I can tell that you are a very talented writer just by reading these two pages! looking forward to reading the rest of the story!
I like how Anastasia justifies what they are about to do. Very well written (hurray for vampire fics that do not sparkle!).
This paragraph is structured beautifully! You're a lyrical writer who has an amazing grasp of sensory imagery! :)
I mean who wouldn't its an amazing story and very descriptive
Some of ur chapters give me the creeps but I think that's what makes me love them more