I love the last sentence, dunnn dunnnnn dunnnnnn ( ! ). Your paragraph was the perfect length and drew me into the story--- voted!
Good intro, gave the background to the story and set up the next chapter nicely. Sad but true about the methods those mental hospitals used back then.
The intro drew me in from the beginning, just like a the beginning should. Good job! Hope you continue writing this! :)
I really like the way this interesting and your giving us good information before starting the story, letting us know what it is all about! Good job! XD
I think the idea of your story is definitely interesting, this is a good beginning and it's got me intrigued, reading on ;) Voting!
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