@prettygiirlj I disagree, it makes it easier to swallow :D awesomeness! Reading on...*voted*
i agree with @JuliaCrane, it's good! though you only need one space for a new paragraph and no more. also try adding a comma in some places :]
Please finish the book. I'm desperate to find out what happens next. It's so good.
This is my favourite kind of story and I can't wait to read further with this story and your other stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
that is so cool, and in my house the roles are reversed. Im the one that sees the ghosts while my dog just sleeps.
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