I really like your writing style! It flows very well :D I love Precious' picture! She looks like a small Audrey Hepburn! :D
Well done! I like the unique start of the flashback as well as the vocabulary u used.
Very well written, and great punctuation. Hardly any spelling mistakes the minor one hear and there. Description is great also.
So far It's really good I hope you make the chapters longer though as to not cut the iv to early. also You have a good hook and it was elegantly written :)
It is out of the box so far, I wonder how they will react together considering E's um personality.
Add to your private library
My LibraryAdd this story to your public reading lists
| Name | Sorria Rothens |
| Location | With 'Em |
| Member Since | Jun 24, 2012 |
| Votes Received | 680 |