I loved the emotion in the poem and the story it tells. I'm a sucker for a happy ending. I give it two thumbs up. :D
I loved this, it had a great flow to it and it's so wonderful, I had to hold back tears because I could feel her pain. <3
The guy I've had a crush on for 8 years wants to join the army when he grows up...
Aw this was so beautiful, it relates to real feeling how alone they are, how sad they are, and how scared they are to loose the person they fell in love with
This reminds me of the song, Just A Dream, by Carrie Underwood. I am so glad, however, that your story/poem has a happier ending!
It won't allow me to vote as many times as I want to. :( Seriously this is amazing. I love this.
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