Just like a melody started to beat
Reading it soothes me for a while;
Taking my heart away as i sit
I thought of it as a song in an album piled!
That was so beautiful, it made me cry! I CRIED! I never cry like that! I love it!
Aww, this is so sweet. It is a nice poem and it doesn't feel cheesy, but honest. And I like how it toes the line between a narrative and a poem.
"How many tears she bled" - beautiful imagery. I love this poem, especially the end. V
I loved the emotion in the poem and the story it tells. I'm a sucker for a happy ending. I give it two thumbs up. :D
I loved this, it had a great flow to it and it's so wonderful, I had to hold back tears because I could feel her pain. <3
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