You know what's stupid? If you hadn't put an exclamation mark in the one sentence long description, I wouldn't of looked twice at this story.
ooooooooo coooooool. interesting, ive never seen a story like this before... I MUST READ ON!!!!!!!!!!!!
Very good! Just change "congratulation" to "Congratulations" ^^ <3 Keep writing!!
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