I love how you ended the prologue! Makes me want to read more! I can tell this is a great story!
Oh my gosh this is so good :) you got me hooked lol can't wait to read more :) voted
A good opening that captivates the reader :] This seems pretty alright so far, and the cover is creative!
I love it i couldnt stop reading and the title caught my eye because it reminded me of tokio hotel and it was the song and i love tokio hotel
Whoa that is awesome, it flows so perfectly. The storyline seems so realistically, even though it's only the prologue. Great job!
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| Name | Diana |
| Location | ITALY, you stalker. |
| Birthday | Jun 13 |
| Member Since | Jun 02, 2012 |
| Votes Received | 6,094 |