well you need more stories like this. if you write more stories like this i will read more of your work.
I like the plot and all, its reall nice , but did u hav to put her mothers death ? I dont like deaths alot though I sometimes feel likr killin ! lol
I'm hooked! And very excited to read on... excuse me if my comments aren't up to scratch, I really just want to read :)
Voted and added it to my library! Good luck in the wattys, you are a good competitor!!
I love it , it has great detail and its a little short but thats okay and i love the cover its really cool
Add to your private library
My LibraryAdd this story to your public reading lists