Friday The 13th
"The sensation of bitterly cold air was as sudden as the swift stop. She could feel almost nothing, blackness bringing bliss relief. It was midnight, November 13th, 2009."
16-year old Carrie Johnson never expected it. Much less to have it happen with Jason Wilson at her side. And she most definitely didn't expect to become a victim.
But 'Douchebag' had other plans, twisted, sick, evil plans.
Will they ever get out?
Or will they die on Friday the 13th?
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midnight-disaster
This got me curious of the happenings. It means you have good writing skills, well this was enjoyable to read. Keep it up!
liked the narration and diary style approach. very descriptive and a thoughtful piece of writing. good stuff!
your description is awesome. I loved reading all of this. And along with the vivid picture you painted it flowed so well :)
I think there is so much dialog here which I love. But I will love it even more with descriptions.
Your descriptions are exhilarating. I thought that this was extremely well written! I shall continue reading now
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