the first chapter was awesome. i really can't wait to find out who that was!!! :D
The ending is so creepy, and I can't help but want to finish the story now. Thank you for getting me hooked :P
Your style of writing has me captured from the get go. You deserve an award :)
It had me fooled to the end.
Ready for publishing! $.$$
Uhm, wow!!! First chapter is killer!! I'm gonna read more and more and more. So good!
SECOND CHAPTER IS EXCELLENT! I love how u didn't wright on the type which P.O.V it is. love it, love it, love it!!!!!!!!!
first chapter is really good, really eager to carry one. More comments in each chapter.
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