WOW very good beginning. it just caught me and i was like i have to keep reading. round of applause to you :)
Extremely descriptive and intriguing...I bow down to your awesome writing style, lol. Great job--I have nothing else to say really. =D
o goosh this iss sooo goood im jeliouse. I wish I could describe stuff like that uughhh
i felt like i read a published book, it was captivating really. the cover is professional and the plot seems well thought out, voted~
First, I really like the fact that it doesn't give too much away and at times it was a tad confusing, but overall I thought it was great!!! Terrific start!
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