Wow, the contract was sure like behind the bars, lol! And being in mandex will surely be hell
Wow. Awesome, amazing, really well written, wonderful original plot, great characters. Yep, you did a really good job. I hope you keep it up :)
Nice work, friend. There were a few places that you were a little awkward with your wording/comma usage, but it was easy to overlook. Will read on!
Just for the record, I love the quote you began with on your description. I would have most likely checked it anyways because of that =)
This was a really gripping start!! You drew me into the action right away, I'm really curious as to where you're going with this! :)
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