This is so sad :( I already feel bad for Allen. Hopefully those bullies get what they deserve! Love it so far. *Voted*
Aw, poor dude! :( I hate it when peeps make fun of others. Great description btw!
They broke his ribs?! Some hardcore bullies! Poor Allen...And I love Colton Haynes as Allen. Great cast. Great start.
I love stories about bullying they're fun and creative ways of opening the problem up to the world! Your writing style really flows well! Voted@!
This is very well described and it's great at pulling you in. i personally like Keith because he actually seems to have a heart. :) great job!
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