This already has the makings of a "grade A" novel. I can't wait to read more!!!!!!
I love how you described every emotion and thought running through Talyn's? mind - voted this for most imaginatiive writting ^_^ I hope you win that one :)
THIS IS REALLY GOOD! All you need is a longer chapter and you can be published!<3 Amazing job, you deserve to win the awards=)
I might be able to hook you up with a publisher......only read a few sentences, amazing publish material!
I'm voting for you in the Wattys! Good luck! You're winning so far :) This story is awesome!
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