This has so much feelings in it. And the questions in the start really makes the readers know more about it :) Good job! Voted.
I love love love this. There were a few sentences that didn't make sense, but theyre easily fixed. Great job.
I just love the style of writing in this one - the way each stanza starts with a question - amazing job <3<3
I love this, I like it even better than the other two I've read. Nice word choice. :)
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