It's wonderful how you used to power of oneself in the poem and the last two lines are really strong enough. You earn my vote dear!
This has so much feelings in it. And the questions in the start really makes the readers know more about it :) Good job! Voted.
I love love love this. There were a few sentences that didn't make sense, but theyre easily fixed. Great job.
I just love the style of writing in this one - the way each stanza starts with a question - amazing job <3<3
I love this, I like it even better than the other two I've read. Nice word choice. :)
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