A woman in the kitchen can make more than just a sandwich.
Yeah but the story would be better if it was specified. There doesn't have to be a long description or anything, but assumptions don't really work in this kinda scenario, u know?
you might as well assume emotionless and placid it seems to fit the feel of it eh?
Amazing story XD the kind of legend I tell my friends at the lunch table. Very creative, how she turns on the drain dispenser with his hand down the drain! I couldn't eat after reading this haha
Oh she's still standing there. Well you may want to mention her reaction and stuff... Is she standing there smiling, or maybe she's emotionless and placid...
Make sure to mention him screaming in pain! This is making my stomach turn XD
Wow, this was so vivid! I had a clear image of what was going on in my head, this is written so well!