1 Part Story 822 Reads 46 Votes
ShaneChowdery By ShaneChowdery Updated 2 months ago
A woman in the kitchen can make more than just a sandwich.
AudreyPolaris AudreyPolaris a month ago
Yeah but the story would be better if it was specified. There doesn't have to be a long description or anything, but assumptions don't really work in this kinda scenario, u know?
you might as well assume emotionless and placid it seems to fit the feel of it eh?
AudreyPolaris AudreyPolaris a month ago
Amazing story XD the kind of legend I tell my friends at the lunch table. Very creative, how she turns on the drain dispenser with his hand down the drain! I couldn't eat after reading this haha
AudreyPolaris AudreyPolaris 2 months ago
Oh she's still standing there. Well you may want to mention her reaction and stuff... Is she standing there smiling, or maybe she's emotionless and placid...
AudreyPolaris AudreyPolaris 2 months ago
Make sure to mention him screaming in pain! This is making my stomach turn XD
noodlesakataylah noodlesakataylah 2 months ago
Wow, this was so vivid! I had a clear image of what was going on in my head, this is written so well!