Crimson Red

1 Part Story 505 Reads 20 Votes
CarolinaV By CarolinaV Updated 2 years ago
What is a person? And what is the mind? What is the mind capable of? This short story is about  a girl who experiences the darker sides of the human mind. Whether it ends well for her or not, you ask? That, you have to find out for yourself.
Maggotseatingme Maggotseatingme 2 years ago
I think im in love with the presentation and the intro-outro paradox
WinterChill WinterChill 3 years ago
Wow, all of your stuff I've read so far make you think of life in a different way. It's really fun to see our world differently :D I love the complex writing you use.
mylifeisaverage mylifeisaverage 4 years ago
Creepers!! That was awesome! My favorite part was the hearts and their last beats. Truly disgusting and loads of horror. 
CjayS42 CjayS42 4 years ago
@CarolinaV Ah yes, it's a little more clear now. Split personailites right? Still, paranormal or not it's a brilliant story : )
007beanie 007beanie 4 years ago
wow. Just. wow.
Slightly gory at the end, lol. But I loved the bit where she was like, i caught sight of myself in the large mirror on the wall.... only that... i dont have a mirror there. LOVE IT.
its sad she had to die tho, and her family =(
natashapreston natashapreston 4 years ago
Well wow! It was amazing! I was scared, confused, surprised and completely shocked! Loved it :D