Really good :D its alot different from what i usually read and i really enjoyed it :)
NEW YORK! :D Sorry I love NY! :L This was awesome!! I loved your descriptions! Good luck with the self publishing!
it really sounds interesting...... voted n added to library........:-) will continue reading the story........
the flow of the story was a little uneven but thats okay,, still a good read, i liked it! good job :D x
Overall a very well-rounded chapter. A bit scattered in the beginning but it seems to be an interesting read. Voted! :D
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