The Pay Back
I'm Mark. I'm an angel. Or thats what they think when they look into my angelic face. But unbelievable evil hides behind those innocent eyes. Evil that no one can imagine. Evil that no one can think I'm capable of committing. Horrors that most people only read about. Horrors that i greatly enjoy !!
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MichelleJaNiecePerry
I was startled and excited about the next happenings. You left my mind with questions and dark materials. It's short but it's wonderful.
This really drew me in, I think it's nice to start off with a small paragraph describing themselves:)
Hm I love horror stories, definitely sounds interesting. Oh and the cover grabbed my attention immediately:D
Isn't that Alex Pettyfer in the cover? Anyways, this was very short and it doesn't really show much of your writing. Make sure you don't have run on sentences.
Wow :D that guys really is creepy :D i can't wait to see the kinds of crimes he commits :D
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