Great start description and detail was great dialogue was well written voted -JiJi
your character is very unique, in a way. Very sarcastic, and sounds like a badass xD She made this very interesting. Can't wait to read on :D
Hahaa, when she attacks Joe it reminds me of what I do to my borther xD Reading ong, and voted! <3
Wow I really like this I cant wait to see where it is going =) Fox is compleatly bad ass I love her <3 please keep it up you have a great way with words xx
Fox seems like a pretty intersting person! I love her attitude and I love the idea for this story. Very itnersting : )
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