District Zero *ON HOLD* (I hate writer's block).

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Chapacabra By Chapacabra Updated 5 months ago
I HATE WRITER'S BLOCK. Sorry to let all of you who are just getting into this, down. If you have noticed, I have been missing from wattpad lately, but i'm coming back with the first chapter of a completed full length thriller/paranormal story, that I have been writing in my free time away from THIS free time (that is, wattpad). My decided title for the finished product is, "The Wrong House". First chapter coming as soon as I have time to upload it from my computer(:
CreativeCooki CreativeCooki 2 years ago
I find your writing to be unique. The plot seems interesting and your character is very likeable. So I'm definatly voting, and since this chapter was good, I'm checking out the next one :)
XxTheFlyingGoose XxTheFlyingGoose 2 years ago
@Chapacabra "11 year old son" > "eleven year old son."

No problemo. xD
KaylaKeifer KaylaKeifer 2 years ago
Wow, your summary was really grabbing! I can tell that your plot is going to be very interesting! I think you have a really good writting style and you do a fantastic job with your structure and providing easy flow! *voteing!
Sorria_Rothens Sorria_Rothens 2 years ago
You've created a supper compelling read that readers of all genres can appreciate. I loved your use of descriptive details and your writings natural flow. This was a chilling read that had me hooked from the start. :)
PickledIceCream PickledIceCream 2 years ago
You did a good job on this. The description gave me chills. Added to library.
guhlynnda guhlynnda 2 years ago
Ok, here's what you need to fix: NOTHING! This was an amazing first chapter:) I definitely am going to keep reading! Very good, and creepy cover!