This is a simple enough scenario, but I feel like it describes regret - no matter if you put out the fire, it still has burned.
I actually really like that fragment at the end. It's sort of stilted...awesome!
lovely imagery, nice and simple (:
I quite like this one very much! @SunAndCandleLight strangely we had the same interpretation. :)
Like a shattered glass. You can put it back together with sweat and blood but the cracks will now always be present.
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