Guys... How to understand them? I liked that in the beginning you were writing in present tense, with her feeling and thoughts, and then the flashback came <3
I have never read anything like this. It is unsual and different. Definatly original :)
God, dudes can be such jerks and lead girls on. If i were you I wouldn't have told him on facebook, but oh well. i hope things are better now :).
I like the conversation from facebook. it really adds to the story :D Keep working on it :)
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