Don't know why but I was crying when I read this chapter, how could her own father mistreat her????
I love your story don't worry about the spelling and grammar that will come just keep writing with heart
This really made me cry, but that's a good thing for it tells me that it's a good story. So if you could update soon I'd be one happy, sulky, nightingale! ( ;
I Agree With Below. Not To bad Of A Plot But Your Gramma..Oh... Please, it's Not.. the Greatest..
I like it, but you should re-read to correct mistakes like capitalizing all your "i"s.
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