17 Part Story 1M Reads 16.9K Votes
_EnglishMuffin By _EnglishMuffin Updated 6 months ago
Lily Anderson is all alone in the world. Brought to Russia by her abusive guardian and then abandoned, she grows up alone and trusts no one. She steals money from the pockets of unsuspecting people in the streets so she can survive. One day she tries to pickpocket Adrian Cole, who catches her in the act. He's mysterious, smart, and not to mention drop dead gorgeous. However, he doesn't want to let her go. There is something dark about Adrian and it's obvious he's hiding secrets. But Lily, afraid of trusting people, tries to push him away. She's terrified of him but can't help but be attracted to him. Will she accept his secret once she finds out what it is?
--I know, I'm not good at summaries, but give it a try. You know you want to (:
RavenRed111 RavenRed111 7 months ago
I love your story, and I can't wait until if is completed. :D
thatvietartist thatvietartist 9 months ago
its really good but try to very your sentences lengths. for example it there are a lot of long sentences back to back throw in a short one and vis versa
SweetSour17 SweetSour17 10 months ago
I like it! It's REALLY good and interesting. Poor her. Her uncle is a little bi*tch and I hope someone beat him to death like one. What kind of person beat on children....or anyone! That's very suck.
LanaRogers LanaRogers a year ago
Your story is different and interesting. I hope you continue.
MuttantandProud MuttantandProud a year ago
This is a really great book. And a lot of people are reading it so don't underestimate yourself
shamsasunshines shamsasunshines a year ago
This is so far a great story !!! Please finish it and don't let the story die!!