You really, how to drag attention! I love the beggining and I didn't find any grammatical mistakes. And the name of Evangelin's little sister is very unique!
Hey Hey !!! I love this soo far :) Your descriptions helped me imagine every single scene! :) VOTED
Its an amazing story. I could imagine it. i like this kind of stories but its really sad that she died. heading off to the next chapter.
@ReaderGirl95 well done you honestly deserve more votes than this its really good :)
wow i love the descriptions, so amazing :) its great descriptions are the key to every story :)
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| Name | Gemma |
| Location | England |
| Birthday | Jan 19 |
| Member Since | Jun 21, 2012 |
| Votes Received | 202 |