The teacher seems a bit weird, I really liked this although it was very short but it makers want to carry on.
I agree with you @iheartdamonsalvatore on the teacher part! Anyway, good work. Voted
Okay that teacher is just weird and eeew! Second, it was really short but I liked that. Prologue wise, it was interesting and left me curious :)
Sort but good the teacher sounds really creep but I think it will capture readers :-)
NIce this is good like a little summary I like it and I have a male teacher also by that name but he's not a pervert or anything I hope lol keep writing :)
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| Name | Brytt |
| Location | Wherever Doctor Who Is... |
| Birthday | Apr 14 |
| Member Since | Jan 01, 2010 |
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