The characters just have so much wow factor, it's very well written, and I would continue reading without a doubt! Definitely keep up the good work:)
There's this casualness to this chapter. It wasn't brooding like most 1st chapters are. Voted
Wow, I really like the title. I love your writing style! You missed a couple puncaction marks, but other than that this is great. Voted. -Cade x3
Perfectly written, Great story, amazing Character :) and I love the Title By the way Great job, can't wait for the second chapter x
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