I think her ...'s r just fine and the book is the perfect speed for me I hate books that just go soooooooo slow
Soo many grammatical errors, but on top of that, a truly amazing story. I read it in just one night. Fantastic :)
LOL, she's scared of people? xD ...this needs major grammatical work & a better intro to ease us into the story. & what happened to that Popsicle? :)
In my honest oppinion, it was only an ok start. But with how many reads it has I am sure it will be a good story
lol. I am already liking this it looks funny. and cute at the same time. You get a vote from me. ^_^
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| Name | Jinn |
| Location | Dream Land |
| Birthday | Oct 09 |
| Member Since | May 13, 2010 |
| Votes Received | 26,303 |